by candi Oct 9, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
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So many times spent alone, |
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Do you mean than on your second stanza? another real good poem room for improvement as ever but still good. |
by TracyM
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I like this one, its short. but i think the way you have expressed the feeling, and emotion within this poem is enough. well written. keep writing, and i will keep reading. xx |
by Kristina
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Aww wow great poem you have written. it's really sad, but then happy at the end. the rhyming was really good and it flowed nicely. keep writing! 5/5 |
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Aww thats sad but a true and beautiful poem, maybe you could elaborate more on her feelings? |