Alone

by candi   Oct 9, 2006


So many times spent alone,
Wainting by the telephone.
Wishing for that needed call,
Asking for her not to fall.

Spending so much time alone by herself,
Loosing so much more then her needed health.
Knowing that has so much.
Yet wishing for his needed touch.

Night after night spent in tears,
calling out each one of her fears.
All she ever wanted was to be happy.,
and all she ever got was a life that was crappy.

Walking out was the best possible thing.
It didnt get her money and it didnt get her fame.
But it was the start of a brand new book.
A life filled with a wonderful new look.

She had made the right choice.
Now her kids could finally rejoice.
They now could be free.
A family they could finally be.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Choose xX Alex Xx Life

    Do you mean than on your second stanza? another real good poem room for improvement as ever but still good.

    xxx alex xxx

  • 16 years ago

    by TracyM

    I like this one, its short. but i think the way you have expressed the feeling, and emotion within this poem is enough. well written. keep writing, and i will keep reading. xx

  • 17 years ago

    by Kristina

    Aww wow great poem you have written. it's really sad, but then happy at the end. the rhyming was really good and it flowed nicely. keep writing! 5/5

    ~Kristina

  • 17 years ago

    by just a little girl

    Aww thats sad but a true and beautiful poem, maybe you could elaborate more on her feelings?