Behind Closed Doors[Acrostic]

by ASPHYXIATED   Oct 11, 2006


Banging on the cobwebbed door,
Endangered voices you can't ignore,
Hungry for help you hear them shout,
Isolated with no way out,
Narcotic thoughts you reflect upon,
Deadened now the shouts have gone.

Clasp the handle...tighten your hold,
Lament sighs now they unfold,
Opposing the door... it wont unlock,
Sorrowful cries growing quieter with each knock,
Exclaiming their pain they suddenly stop,
Desperation in their voice... it suddenly drops.

Distant now the voice's are,
Once so close now drifted afar,
Omit the memories... forget the past,
Realistic thoughts turn so fast,
Stories behind closed door's; forgotten.

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  • 18 years ago

    by XxWorthlessxX

    This is very good. Very well written, Amazing choice of words. Your amazing. Your poems are amazing. Great job. 5/5
    `-jackie.

  • 18 years ago

    by xxSnow Angelxx

    Well penned poem..with great flow n ecellent word choice
    U've real talent in acrostics
    Great job!
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  • 19 years ago

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  • 19 years ago

    by .K.i.T.t.Y.

    That is good, u wroet with skill. =) i am not to good at acrostics.

  • 19 years ago

    by Arcane Blondie

    Wow....that's intense writing skill---I love it!! Your word choice is absolutely perfect, and the flow is flawless--- No doubt, 5/5--- =D

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