Ive Woken To Find Myself In The Shadows Of My Past

by disturbed one   Oct 14, 2006


I was in the discussion area and i stumbled upon a topic that was a use this line contest so i checked it out and saw a line i liked and tried to use it...of course as u probably already know the line was

Ive woken to find myself in the shadows of my past

So i pondered it for a few minutes and came up with this

I remember a time,
Ten years before the present,
A day when I was immoral,
A side of me I resent,

I was a slave,
To my own deceitful lies,
Its something that wont leave,
A side of my I despise,

I am now clean,
I cut no longer,
Ive stopped the urge,
And I have become stronger,

As I fall asleep,
I have a vision,
In this dream I cut,
And make a deep incision,

I realize I already woke,
This breath could be my last,
Ive woken to find myself,
In the shadows of my past,

I was a slave,
To my own deceitful lies,
Its something that wont leave,
A side of me which has become my demise

Hope you like it. Please R/R/C and i will return the favor

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  • 17 years ago

    by disturbed one

    Lol...ya i guess it was kinda random

  • 17 years ago

    by Jessie

    Crystal ball!! LOL I just laughed SO hard!!!

  • 17 years ago

    by disturbed one

    Haha cinderella...will take go with me to the crystal ball? hmm no? how bout for a pair of glass slippers! lol

  • 17 years ago

    by aDORKable x3

    Haha i had to comment again (psst, Im not his cinderella... lol) i keep thinking that it's mine, but I'm just stupid like that =P

    cIao XxX

  • 17 years ago

    by disturbed one

    Ya lol...i was completely confused by what u meant cuz i didnt recognize ur name lmao....ya stupid spelling errors! lol