Beget this Love

by IdTakeABulletForYou   Oct 15, 2006


Thine eyes that shine like summers sun
a hope held in my hands begun
with simple words come from thy mouth
and so our love begins...

it took a dream to make this true
it takes a heart; thy love whilst do
and ever-lasting hope redeems
a truth undreamt for thy to please

you ne'er take my heart
and smash unto the burdened ground
for our love's kindled within
a stronger, evergrowing passion

you watch thine eyes as i just stare
whilst things once lost are now repaired
a time of calling, a time of hope
thou lingered presence will ne'er go

could you see me o'er the hills
as i could see the heart thy fills
thenceforth all time will cease to stop
as we will be one at the heart

the two will ne'er find sere love
we ne'er will betray the trust
thou chance hast ne'er come before
together ascertain we canst ignore

a thouroughgoing love will last
until the day our lives shall pass
and thine eyes fuel the love enough;
just a word begets this love

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  • 16 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    I adore this..
    I enjoyed the language you used, it created an impression.
    The imagery created vivid pictures, while the flow was good throughout.
    The wording was a pleasure to read, as was the whole poem.
    You did an excellent job with this, you should be proud.

  • 17 years ago

    by KaKaSHi

    Wow...amazing stephen...not anyone call pull off a shakespearian poem!
    and u did so with flying colours!
    i had to look up wat "sere" meant..:P
    hehe..
    loved the last stanze...
    a 5/5 from me...again...=D

  • 17 years ago

    by Lauren Waszkiewicz

    Amazing.. Nothing Bad i can say-except i need to improve my vocabulary.. Amazing. i was blown away. youre one of those few people i think Bob would say can actualyl write love poems.

  • 17 years ago

    by Kristina

    Love it! 5/5

    ~Kristina

  • 17 years ago

    by Sweet lig

    I think u are a good write! well, keep up the good work and keep on writing and sharing ur very nice poets 5/5

    god bless