Keeping My Smile

by *Charisma*   Oct 31, 2006


I never imagined one person could take
Everything that meant something to me
I used to belong all to myself
But with you entertwined all my dreams

So when you finally took your leave
With it you stole all my belongings
Now I am in an empty house
With memories that mean nothing

I wake up in the middle of the night
To find that nobody's home
I go to the cabinet where there's one cup
To remind me I am alone

Things aren't the same without their pair
So without you I'm just a half
Half of everything I used to be
Like a joke without a laugh

Maybe you took all that I have
Everything that made life worthwhile
But there's one item you forgot
And I've decided I'm keeping my smile.

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  • 17 years ago

    by 888Trinity888

    I also really liked that stanza (above). This was very cleverly written, but bitter and moving at the same time. gr8 job! -Trinity

  • 17 years ago

    by ღ»Lσιѕ«ღ

    Great Job, i really liked this poem, I loved this stanza

    "Things aren't the same without their pair
    So without you I'm just a half
    Half of everything I used to be
    Like a joke without a laugh"

    I thought it was clever!! I love how it ended!! Flow was good!!! 5/5!!

  • 17 years ago

    by BlueDreams

    Dear, what a beautiful penned once again you potray here, so beautiful emotions, yet heartbraking written, i wish thing doing well with you, take care, bert ~

  • 17 years ago

    by Twisted Heart

    This was rather good. loved the way you ended it. Although it seemed befitting that he left you all of that. A smile is God's way of getting back at the ones who hurt you.

    Good flow, and content.

    Happiness
    Jeannie

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