If Walls Could Cry....

by *Charisma*   Jan 26, 2008


Turned the lights down low
I've got nowhere to go
Nothing better I should do
Than sit and think about you

Turned a sad song on
And with it sang along
I didn't know the words
But I understood the hurt

With a broken heart
I begin to fall apart
But that's okay tonight
No one's here to fight

So I'll cry a few more tears
And let go of my fears
Not a soul around this place
To see the pain leaving my face

This night is just for me
And the way things used to be
I'm tired of acting fine
Or telling pretty lines

If I break down, then good
I'll feel like I should
Once I hit this all time low
Not much farther I can go

Maybe then I can heal
Allow this heart to feel
It's been so hard to pretend
When I'm breaking down again

The truth is in these walls
Only they can see my fall
If they could talk, they'd cry
Just like I plan on tonight...

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  • 14 years ago

    by Ike Dizzle

    Aww I know the feeling of a broken heart and it sucks cuz u seem like you are all alone and no one feels ur pain. Its hard to get over bt you will. I'm in the middle of that now. Great poem though 5/5
    -vino

  • 15 years ago

    by Gem

    "Turned a sad song on
    And with it sang along
    I didn't know the words
    But I understood the hurt"

    Oh wow. I think EVERYONE male and female alike can relate whole heartedly to this stanza.

    Amazing work Charisma, as always!! I've missed your poems since i've been gone from the site, but now i'm back, i hope to read more and more =)

    5/5
    Gem

  • 15 years ago

    by TillyMariex

    Wow...this is like...amazing...i really like it <3

  • 16 years ago

    by Becca

    5/5! that was great. I understand what it's like to be tired of holding everything in and just wanting release. Great Piece!

  • 16 years ago

    by C Cattaway

    It sounded like a well versed song.. maybe Joni Mitchell would have sang those lines, once.. You have taken a common subject, and given it a personal slant.. Well done. Fantastically written. xx

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