That is extremely powerful! I mean the way you can make me envision this scene is amazing. And, too, how easily you can make him seem heartless and cold (borderline maniac) with the line about watching tv after he beats her half to death. Amazing job Charisma!!! :) 5/5 without a doubt!
Oo, i nearly cried at this one.
Its awful when someone used a loved one as a punchbag because they don't feel right at the way they are living.
And it's terrible how a ring can bind you for life..
A chilling poem, well done
"wish she could have read through sugar coated lies" <-- my favourite lines in the whole piece. they just held so much power and depth. the flow was good throughout and the imagery you painted was beautiful, it was like i could see everything that was happening. this is beautiful...heart breaking and filled with melancholy, yes. but still beautiful and elegant