Life's Induction

by ReBecca   Nov 3, 2006


Life's Induction

Wisps of youth
swept away.
Ripped and torn,
time to pray.

Pray for what?
Life's heartbeats?
Time to conquer
all these feats.

Ripped from agony,
torn asunder.
God's depth
yet to plunder.

Crosses struck,
promises made.
Giving up
things portrayed.

Battered and bruised.
Man's destruction.
Innocence gone
with life's induction.

ReBecca Sanchez

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  • 17 years ago

    by Gem

    Excellent rhythm!
    the beats were spot on and the words flowed perfectly..
    and what words they were..
    Amazing piece Rebecca!
    5/5
    *Gem*

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    I liked this, I thought it was well thought out, and I liked the wording and flow.
    I thought there could be more imagery and emotion in it, but apart from that, it was good. 4/5