Disturbed One

by disturbed one   Nov 3, 2006


Had to write a poem about my name...that doesnt necessarily mean its about me but this is what i came up with...just for the record if you dont think its good...i did it in less then 3 minutes...so i have an excuse

Disturbed One

I may be disturbed,
I may be insane,
But I have the right to cry,
Whenever I feel pain,

I may be one,
I may be alone,
But I have to the right to call,
Anyone on the phone,

I may be disturbed,
I may be one,
But you dont have the right,
To laugh just for fun

R/R/C plz and i shall return the favor

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  • 17 years ago

    by disturbed one

    Hahaha...like...whats wrong with u...ur all quiet at school(or not even there!!! >:() and then...it all comes out in hilarity on the computer...or ur loud at school(or not even there!!! >:() and u dont even talk after that...like...god ur bipolar hahaa ily

  • 17 years ago

    by Jessie

    *pats head* Let it all out Natey. Aww don't be a sad boy.

  • 17 years ago

    by aisyned

    Good job!!

  • 17 years ago

    by aDORKable x3

    Alright, i'll be honest with you, it was definately different...( if my typing sucks, i'm still getting used to my step-dad's laptop... grrr!) neways, all in all, not bad!
    Ciao xx

  • 17 years ago

    by disturbed one

    Haha thanks

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