This is not forever

by ShootingStar179   Nov 9, 2006


I am so happy,
I could dance,
My smiles would never end,
In my mindless trance.

The world will spin at my fingertips,
I will laugh and smile in your arms,
For your face brings a giggle to my face,
Your heart has never brought me harm.

I feel secure and safe,
I am no longer dealing with this loneliness
And that is a good change
It evaporated with my hand intertwining with yours.

Because I feel so beautiful,
When you hold me close and whisper in my ear,
You only say the best and perfect things,
You say everything I want to hear.

I know this is not forever,
I will not attach to your heart,
I do not believe in forever anymore
But at least you are making me ecstatic for a part.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Anonymous

    Awe, the ending was really cute and sweet. It wasn't one of the best poems I have ever read, but it was really cute. Your rhyming scheme could have been better and you could have used better word choice. The flow was above average, as was the imagery. Nice- 4/5.

  • 17 years ago

    by kelS;

    Omg i love itt.
    is so like.. postive! haha i love itt. it flows really good for mee! 5/5!

  • 17 years ago

    by catherine

    It was good, but I didn't feel that it flowed as well as it could've.

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