Dodging Bullets

by *Charisma*   Nov 18, 2006


Dodging bullets shot my way
Little words I want to say
But hearing them, you'd know the truth
So I skip over words for you

Things I'd love to say but won't
Want you to hear them, but you don't
Words that could change both our lives
Knowing now, the time's not right

So I whisper them when alone
As of now, they are my own
You want answers, but I dance
Around your heart's beating entrance

I'd love to enter into that place
Find myself in love's embrace
But not right now, another day
I'm dodging bullets I'd love to take.

(bullets symbolize questions of how she feels)

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  • 17 years ago

    by BECCA lessTHANthree

    Wow.. great symbolism.. amazing flow and rhyme.. strong emotions.. great poem.. i love it! keep up the great Work!!!

  • 17 years ago

    by Bryan

    This is very good, i loved the symbalism in the poem. 5/5!!!

  • 17 years ago

    by Gem

    I can't find anything wrong with this one at all! Apart from a few glitches i had when reading it aloud because i got my rhythem mixed up, it was perfect.
    I especially liked how you replaced questions with bulltets.
    It symbolised how questions can seem to be shot at you with at an alarming rate =)
    Excellent piece
    5/5
    Gem and Tara

  • 17 years ago

    by TheRevelation

    Wow great poem "I'd love to enter into that place
    Find myself in love's embrace
    But not right now, another day
    I'm dodging bullets I'd love to take"

    that was my favorite part to me it sumed it up good ..well great job once again keep it up

  • 17 years ago

    by BlueDreams

    Lovely penned within beautiful emotions you potray here, simply yet so heartfelt....well done!

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