Your Puppet.

by ASPHYXIATED   Nov 23, 2006


Take my strings, Lead the way,
I'm your puppet, Day by day,
Control my actions ; Be my voice,
I'm your puppet, I have no choice.

My body swifts freely ; Thoughts controlled.
My lack of Independence does unfold.
You're the director of my life story.
I play the role, You steal the glory.

Emotionless and bare, Alone I stand,
Cautious to your next demand.
Mission completed ; Job well done,
Out of control my life has spun.

You're the director of my life story,
I play the role, you steal the glory.

Control my actions ; Be my voice,
I'm your puppet, I have no choice.

By Lisa Westlake. ©

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  • 17 years ago

    by .K.i.T.t.Y.

    This was great. i love the poems you've wrote, well the ones ive read so far. the rhyming and repition in this one gave it a great flow and ending. i wish i knew how to fix this and give you constructive critism.

    5/5.
    i need to find a poem of yours to pick apart. =]

  • 17 years ago

    by shawn

    That's amazing, i loved it alot. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Andrew

    Superb, amazing, truely wonderful. But enough about you, this is another well written poem with another great message. Congratumalations

  • 17 years ago

    by xoxShorteexox

    I thought it was never good.
    I felt the emotion.
    It was beautiful.
    I love your work like alwys.
    Lovce you
    xxxxx

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