Together We Stand (Rubiyat)

by Gem   Dec 13, 2006


Togther we stand, together we fall
And across the floor, together we crawl
No matter what happens it's me and you
And in the end we'll be standing tall

Together we fall, together we stand
Both stood together, hand in hand
No matter what happens, it you and me
It's something that few will understand... ©

*Gem*

(Rubiyat - This arabic format has a quatrain where the first second and fourth lines rhyme. The rhyme scheme is thus; a-a-b-a. A single stanza can be a poem itself or multiple stanzas may be joined to create a larger piece. x)

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  • 17 years ago

    by john graver

    Another awesome poem.5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by melly

    I love it
    its so gorgeous
    i give it five stars

  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    What can I say but wonderful! I think I need to learn more on poetry writing! I only know what I read and I like it! Excellent!

  • 17 years ago

    by Gem

    Thankyou everyone.. i'm pretty much speechless at your lovely comments..
    Thankyou..

  • 17 years ago

    by x.Athame.x

    Absolutely stunning, such talent you posess in the realm of written words. Best wishes and blessed be. *5/5