Slipping Away

by Gem   Dec 24, 2006


I'm falling apart now
And slipping away
Cracking up with every
Word that you say

The pieces of me
Are scattered around
Their fading away now
Without a sound

Keeping it together
Was all just to much
I started to break
Was too fragile to touch

I thought that my soul
Was much stronger that this
Gave up without a fight
From the very first kiss

The effect you had on me
Was too much to bare
My mind saw this coming
My heart didn't care

I'm slipping away now
And falling apart
You have all that's left
So look after my heart ©

*Gem*

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  • 19 years ago

    by im ur AdDiCtiOn

    Thats really great i really like it

  • 19 years ago

    by Richina

    I love this because it relates so much to the human heart

  • 19 years ago

    by Twisted Heart

    I believe that in the lines:

    "I thought that my soul
    Was much stronger that this"

    should be:

    "I thought that my soul
    Was much stronger than this"

    Otherwise a good read. The flow was flawless and the content and message well done.

    Jeannie

  • 19 years ago

    by ~Steph~

    This was very good!

  • 19 years ago

    by Wasted Fake Smiles

    Well, you have such a gift. i loved the detailing yet again, it really painted a picture. the flow was great too. 5/5

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