A Lie

by Goran Rahim   Dec 28, 2006


Like
Any other lover
I had passion,
For a person too.
The one for whom
I spend many nights
Fighting the clock,
Forcing my pen,
To write a beautiful poem.
Like
Any other lover,
I was loved
By an angel
Who was spending
Her
Quality times
To
Write me a poem as well.
A beautiful love,
From two poetic hearts.
But,
It was ruined
By a lie.
A lie
That turned off
The candle of the hopes.
A lie
That collapsed
Two hearts.
A lie
That changed
Two destinies.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    Beautifully penned. This part was especially touching:

    I was loved
    By an angel
    Who was spending
    Her
    Quality times
    To
    Write me a poem as well.
    A beautiful love,
    From two poetic hearts.
    But,
    It was ruined
    By a lie.

    Great job.

  • 17 years ago

    by blueknight

    OMG this poem teased me lols greatly written and yeah all of you have say was true and very well penned I think thgis poem was for me lol hahaha sorry if i left the poetry but then there are momories of friends here at my heart ou know that dude great poem

  • 17 years ago

    by Brittany C

    Another wonderful poem. Great job another 5/5 :)

  • 17 years ago

    by Taylor

    Have you ever read something and, even though you just kind of skim through, not really focusing on the words, you feel this kick right in your chest? I think that your poem might have subconciously made me weak. Nice.

  • 17 years ago

    by Autuumnbree

    Xcellent poem, i like the feelings and heartfelt thoughts that i see in it. Good job.

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