Uncover The Lies

by Mommy And Me   Jan 4, 2007


Uncover The Lies [contradictory to cover the lies]

Walking down streets
Catching their eyes
A smile so sweet
And a hidden lie

A seductive scent
Swirls around her
Turning some heads
Kissing the sky

Lips of an angel
Eyes of a goddess
She wonders where
She has gone wrong

Walking these steps
She feels her heart beat
It has been long
Sinse she has confessed

Into a chapel
She uncovers her lie
The bruises and pain
Has taken her soul

Midnight blue liner
Turns to black scars
Cherry red lipstick
Uncovers pale pink lips

Lighting a candle
She looks to the heavens
Asks for forgiveness
And uncovers her lies

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  • 17 years ago

    by aDORKable x3

    Whoa, stupid computer spazam... lol I was going to say that otherwise it was a great poem. I knew what you were saying it it =]

    Ciao

  • 17 years ago

    by aDORKable x3

    Terra, I read the first one, so I had to come read this one. Minor notes, second stanza, last word first line, "sent" should be "scent"
    fourth stanza, second line last word, "beet" should be "beat"
    last line in the sanza should be "since" not "sense"

  • 17 years ago

    by aDORKable x3

    Terra, I read the first one, so I had to come read this one. Minor notes, second stanza, last word first line, "sent" should be "scent"
    fourth stanza, second line last word, "beet" should be "beat"
    last line in the sanza should be "since" not "sense"

  • 17 years ago

    by .K.i.T.t.Y.

    Wow. beautiful poem. There were just spelling errors. Like use of the wrong homophone and such stuff.

    Are you still doing my Fairytale contest?

  • 17 years ago

    by Bridgette

    I really like this feeling. There's just something about it that makes me really really like it. It's different than most poems. I think that you did a great job on describing everything and I like the way that you didn't tell what her lies were.. it makes the reader wonder about the poem. Great job on this. 5/5

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