Fight till the lights go out!

by Independence Forever   Jan 5, 2007


Fight on with your sword in hand!
Fight on, draw a line in the sand!

For me then cross the bloody line!
against me your life will be mine!

Stand firm and hold your grounds
stand firm, the final trumpet sounds

fight for your life, never despair
fight for your beliefs you always share

take the battle to the enemy line
fight on till death is mine

i pray you never forget
the battle is not over yet

yea thought i fight alone
my hope and light are the best ever known

fight on through life's big bout
fight till the lights go out

    report violation
0


Did You Like This Poem?

Latest Comments

  • 18 years ago

    by xxSnow Angelxx

    Lovely lovely write.soo true....very well worded n neat write...lol...even i hd a knight's image in my mind!:D
    Simple n Perfect..n flowed well too.great wrk!..another 5/5 as always!
    xxPoojaxx

  • 18 years ago

    by KeyxMashingxParody

    Lol I really liked it! Kudos 5/5!

    -Liz-
    ~of life to live~

  • 18 years ago

    by BrokenREALiTy

    Whoa . Like it . For some reason, a knight in shining armour comes to mind :P

    yea thought i fight alone
    my hope and light are the best ever known

    BTW did you mean "Yeah though I fight alone" ? XD Cuhs` I was like Whaaa ? when I read that line . The flow was really good, and I just liked it .
    ..__MiNDYY

  • 18 years ago

    by tryinXtoXholdXmyXheadXup

    Your an amazing writer and you carry great skill. good job keep it up

  • 18 years ago

    by Lemon Square Bear23

    Nice write Dave
    5/5 your favorite friend
    Kate

Read All Comments (11)

More Poems By Independence Forever