In a crowded room

by Infected with His Deadly Love   Jan 5, 2007


I'll stand here alone
While everyone has fun
I'll be miserable again
I'll be the only one

I'll pretend to be happy
And put on a smile
But inside I'm dying
Have been for awhile

While everyones laughing
I cant wait to go home
To the comfort of my room
Where I can be alone

Instead of being here
In this doom
I'm just a lonely girl
In a crowded room

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  • 17 years ago

    by disturbed one

    Ooh i like it...it was simply written which is good and it flowed well...and made sense all at the same time...great job

    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Idiosyncratic

    I know I said the other one was easy to relate to, but this is even more so.

    The last stanza really improves the poem and ties together the other stanzas.

    Wonderfully written! 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Gem

    I liked this one cos the rhymes were simple making it easy and enjoyable to read.
    Plus it's a ubject many can relate to.
    Well written
    5/5
    *Gem*

  • 17 years ago

    by e LIZ a beth

    ILOVETHISPOEM!!!! its amazing!!!!! i loved this title and i wasnt expecting the poem for it to turn out as good as it did but you proved me wrong. great job!

  • 17 years ago

    by Carrotgirl

    You have so many wonderful poems sarah, this one probably discribes about half the people on this site.
    Elise

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