Lies

by lala   Jan 15, 2007


You have forsaken me
Left me here to cry alone
No one to hear my screams
My pain
Your love like a scorch mark on my heart
An imprint on my soul
I want to forget
But I cannot
The memory of you tears me apart
How could you be so cruel?
You acted like you loved me
You said that you did
But you lied
You lied and now you've left me here to die
Alone
Forgotten
Broken
I can never forgive you
The pain is too great
All those nights I cried myself to sleep
Over you
Over the times you've said "I Love You"
But it was a lie
It was all a lie
Your love for me was a lie
But I loved you
I loved you with all my heart
All my being
I thought you were my reason to live
But you weren't
Because it was a lie
I never should have trusted you
You've forsaken me.......
Left me here to cry alone......

And now I don't know who I can trust

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  • 16 years ago

    by Live WeLL

    Very deep and very emotional.. many people can def relate to this poem.. very well written.. good job.. keep it up and thanks for the comment =]

  • 17 years ago

    by Mousie

    Now this one was really good, really a great write... i'm gonna give you one tip, as you're getting older, work on the vocab, try to steer clear of the generic words, put more description into them... you're already starting to do that, and being the age you are, that's wonderful, you certainly don't write like a 13 yr old... great job, you really have a lot of talent. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Curry

    Wow you are an amazing writer!

  • 17 years ago

    by Sandra D

    This poem is amazing!! i really can relate, that's exactly how i felt when my ex broke up with me, it tore me apart inside. i cried over him, he'd lied to me for so long about the way he felt... but great job! u have a lot of talent, i can't wait to read more!! 5/5!!!

    Forever*Yours

  • 17 years ago

    by Namida

    Wow, this is a great poem. Keep up the good work! But its good to trust people, and I hope you regain that trust.

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