Love At Last

by *Charisma*   Jan 17, 2007


Heartbreaks and disappointment
Burning, sweltering within
Doubts overtaking truths
Of finding a love again

More fish lie in the ocean
But none seem to catch my eye
Now thoughts swell within
"Is love worth another try?"

Am I okay if tears shall fall
And my diary's filled with pain?
Can I watch roses he gave
Wilt with calls that never came?

Then out of the blue, it rings
Who's possibly on the line?
I thought it was over, but it's not
He just needed a little time.

So my heart says give the chance
That you need to feel okay
And off I head on another
Of those wonderful second dates

As the evening progresses
And new roses fill the vase
I shout out, "LOVE AT LAST"
Has broken my lonely days!

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  • 18 years ago

    by BrixGoesxRawr

    Awww. I loved this. It was so amazing. Very sweet & had a lot of emotion in it. I have absolutley nothing bad to say about this.. The ending was perfect, so very happy :] & The imagery was wonderful.

    "More fish lie in the ocean
    But none seem to catch my eye
    Now thoughts swell within
    "Is love worth another try?""

    ^^ That is so true for many people.. I can deffinitely relate to this. That stanza was just.. amazing.

    Absolutley beautiful. Keep it up, dear.

    Bri.x

  • 18 years ago

    by Hott Mama

    Wow...I love it, it's so touching and so emotionally sweet! Great job .:*.

  • 18 years ago

    by Krzysztof J

    Absolutly amazing :)

  • 18 years ago

    by Gem

    "More fish lie in the ocean
    But none seem to catch my eye
    Now thoughts swell within
    "Is love worth another try?""

    Oo, excellent imagery my dear. And yay, a happy ending! Love it =)
    The other poet was Cindy cos she's like an online mother to me.
    I'll get it written as soon as i can, i can't remember when the deadline was, lol
    But back to the poem, amazing!
    5/5
    *Gem*

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