by *Charisma* Jan 18, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
first love
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First love |
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Very cute love poem.. again its got perfect flow and amazing rhyme ... nice job! :) |
by debbylyn
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Very romantic sentiments in this piece. Good overall...nicely done once again. 5/5 |
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AMAZING!! i loved it!!!! ur an awesome writer!! dont let anyone tell u different!!!! |
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Wow. This is amazing. I absolutely love it. It flowed really well. & The rhyming was great. A lot of emotion in this. & It was just so beautiful. Amazing job. Keep it up, Hun. |
by lil swimmer
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This is real sweat! |