Our Special Place

by BeautifulxMess   Jan 20, 2007


If I could speak more than I think
I know I'd be a better person now.
If I could fly to the sky above me
I hope I'd see you again some how

Only God knows how I miss you
and He knows the pain that I feel.
When I heard that you were gone
I never felt a bruise so blue and real.

I knew that if He loved me so
I wouldn't cry over you leaving me.
So I wiped my eyes dry on my face
so the tears won't fall on my cheek.

It was hard but I made it through
because I know you're proud of me.
I know that you think I forget
but I can't forget what you made me be.

You made me a loving child
that grew to learn from their mistakes.
You taught me right from wrong
and took me fishing in the lakes.

I'll never forget our memories
that I hold so dear to my heart.
You took me to the park to play
and we stayed out until it was dark.

Now I think I wish I could have
said thank you; I love you; I miss you.
Now you're long gone from this world
you're still in my soul it's true.

I hope you hear what I'm saying
and take it to heaven with your grace.
I miss y'all both so much and dear
and I'll never forget our special place.

*For my loving great grand parents that were the ONLY left to help me back up.
I miss you two very much.
I love y'all.

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  • 17 years ago

    by lala

    That poem had great energy. It flowed smoothly and it even rhymed! As I read this, I felt a stab at my heart. You see, someone I knew passed away the other day, so I can definatly relate to how you feel. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by BECCA lessTHANthree

    Awww.. spectacular poem.. another great one.!!! you can tell its very heartfelt.. keep it up

  • 17 years ago

    by Sammie Jo

    Hi, wow this is a really good poem, well l8trz ~Sam~

  • 17 years ago

    by MischieviousMya

    Beautifully written! i loved every line!! amazing!!! keep it up!! =o]

  • 17 years ago

    by DarkNDangerous

    I love this poem!!