Tribute

by UnToLd TrUtH   Jan 24, 2007


This is a tribute to you my dear friend. For all the pain you have going through, all the tears that stream down you beautiful face.

All because of this one being this one who is not the all seeing the one who is dark and deals with the shadows. This being is the one called Death.

He has knocked on you door my dear friend and was let in. Let in and took someone dear to you, never caring that it has caused you so much pain.

Never to see you for its doing, never to have held, never to have laughed with you. But my dear friend I will be the one to see you cry, to hold and to make you laugh.

*Don't know if this is good. This is about my friend who's cousin committed suicide at the age of 20 and wanted to write her a poem. Tell me what you think!**

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  • 16 years ago

    by BeautifulxMess

    That is very sad. I'm sorry for your lost. I had a grandmother who commited suicide. It wasn't easy at all. This poem was better than the other. Wel Thank you for the coment!
    God Bless 5/5
    <3Tay

  • 17 years ago

    by Delie

    It's beautiful!
    just that your friend has someone's shoulder to cry on is the best...on top of that you wrote her a poem (which is very good) so she must be feeling better already...

  • 17 years ago

    by Sandra D

    This is amazing!! there's so muc emotion. i'm so sorry that your friend did that, but i think it's good that you could turn your emotions into this!! great job!

    Forever*Yours

  • 17 years ago

    by shawn

    This was a very good poem in my opion, it was deep and painted a nice little picture. It actually reminded me of a Family Guy skit with death, but that's besides the point. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Faceless Mirror

    I think you could drop the last line in verse two. I feel it's like adding sugar to a chocolate-bar, know what I mean?

    Anyways, it was an emotional write and full of real feelings. Hope everything's okay.

    Keep it up.

    -Kenneth G. @ Faceless Mirror.

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