Silent Cries And Invisible Tears

by Michelle18   Jan 25, 2007


It hurts her so much,
She needs some help,
Without his touch,
Her heart cant be felt.
But she's had enough,
She's had all she can take.
She's lost his trust,
No longer has his faith.
But she's so confused,
She sometimes wants to die.
But since he couldnt be true,
She will not cry.
She doesnt let it show,
The fear of him disappears.
So this time she lets him go,
By crying silent cries and shedding invisible tears.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Bugg

    Whoa. That was such a great read. It was really "real" on alot of different levels. Sorry if that doesn't really make sense, that's just the best I could describe it... o_O

    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Hidden1

    This is a so true poem, keep up the good work. I can feel this from beginning to end.

  • 16 years ago

    by AmberSherrellxxIve Been Sitting Here Trying To Find Myselfxx

    Amazing!It was well written and nearly flawless.The stanzas were pretty good.All in all it was a great poem.5/5

    <3Amber

  • 17 years ago

    by Kaila

    I loved this it was really deep nice job your poems are great!

  • 17 years ago

    by brittany

    Wow!! i really liked it ur an amazing writter i love all your poems 5/5 comment mine if you get the chance thanx!

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