This time

by disturbed one   Jan 26, 2007


Ok umm...i had to take a poem of xA little bit dramaticx\'s and turn it into something of my own...her poem This time\" was actually a love poem...and she wanted me to use some of the lines from hers to use in mine so she could tell which poem it was from...so....check hers out....and heres mine....

This time

You shine like a star,
Whenever you see light,
No matter how dark it is,
You help me through the fight,

I lay here all alone,
Society seems so far away,
But I crave conversation,
Theres so much I need to say,

A future that doesnt fit,
But Im still dreaming,
This isnt actually happening,
But inside Im screaming,

I think we\'ve gone too far,
We\'ve crossed the line,
Do you feel it,
We cut too deep this time

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  • 17 years ago

    by disturbed one

    I figured ud be the one to like that one...cuz i knew ud understand it lol

  • 17 years ago

    by Jessie

    Oh, btw I forgot to mention my fav stanza ^.^ You poem writer, you. =D

    A future that doesnt fit,
    But Im still dreaming,
    This isnt actually happening,
    But inside Im screaming,

    Thats awesome!

  • 17 years ago

    by disturbed one

    If anyone wants to see the poem i kinda got the idea from go here

    http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/sad/poems.php?id=827813

    i didnt really get the idea from that poem in general but because i know jessie in real life i got it from her kinda so...ya

  • 17 years ago

    by aisyned

    That was great!!!

  • 17 years ago

    by Jessie

    Aww I really like this poem. =)
    5/5