Alone (I'm so lonely)

by NeferNoir   Jan 29, 2007


Bloodless lips,
whisper the rain.
Betrayal leaves,
a permanent stain.
Written.
Scarred.

Empty eyes,
watching midnight sky.
Lifeless smiles,
scream the goodbye.
Abandoned.
Left.

Bind my mouth,
with razor ribbons.
Watch your back,
I know your secrets.
Divulged.
Bared.

Read my suicide,
like how I taught you.
I am a lie,
but you are the truth.
Tainted.
Confused.

You squeezed my throat so tight,
breaking my flesh and heart and bone.
Cry beside the moon.
Alone.

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  • 15 years ago

    by DreamingOutLoud

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  • 17 years ago

    by Sarah

    Wow ! amazing & captivating... Well written & beautifully penned 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    Okay. I frikken loved this.
    This was just beautiful. Simply beautiful.

    I felt the whole piece was so powerful and filled with such intensity throughout.
    Once again, you did a wonderful job with the imagery.

    That ending...wow. So much power that it hits the reader like a slap in the face.

    Amazing work on this.

  • 18 years ago

    by Saraphene

    Stnningly beautiful.

    thats all that needs to be said.

  • 18 years ago

    by CY GINDLE

    Again thanks for your comments i just want t0o ask you yopu said some of my poems sound like lyrics then how can i put them togeter with music and make a song any
    ideals? anyway enough about me did you ever read any of koriey''s poems she writes
    that dark stuff like you my favorite poem ever is by her its caklled 8:11 you got to read it anbd all her stuff im going read some
    of yours now so don't expect much dark
    poems are too deep for me. i love how they sound but im too dumb to get thier real meaning cy

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