Willow Creek

by Lithium   Jan 30, 2007


A single rose that's held its head high,
Begins to wilt as the years pass it by,
Scolded my wind, and the bitter rain,
A wild angel lives, no one can tame,

Her thorns slowly decompose,
Her scars are left open and exposed,
Simple pleasures become daily chores,
As she diminishes upon a distant shore,

Each leaf has been wrenched from her fragile torso,
Craving for her actions made a long time ago,
To feel her blood sweat once more,
And trickle down her fingers, as many times before,

The edges that sliced deep within her sole,
No longer exist in her household,
She made a decision to grow again,
In the back alleys of willow creek lane,

Crystal eyes now sparkle with a happiness long lost,
Pearl tears no longer make winter mourns frost,
Yellow as the sun beneath and umbrella,
Bright as the flower she has become.

Wrote on January 30th, 2007
© Samantha Jayne Reed

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  • 17 years ago

    by x.Athame.x

    Goregous. Absolutely goregous. This has beautiful imagery, superb flow and cadence. I adored the first and last stanzas. Not to say the others weren't good, they were. But those two really stuck out. Wonderful job on this.

    My only suggestion
    "Scolded *my wind, and the bitter rain" - *by

  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    This was beautiful!
    A single rose that's held it's head high,
    Begins to wilt as the years pass it by,
    Scolded by wind, and the bitter rain,
    A wild angel lives, no one can tame,
    This gives an amazing start to your poem and it just gets better. Excellent Job!

  • 17 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    An ultimate thought & lovely selection of words indeed. Your imagination and the way u have shared so much abt a rose...is just so outstanding..loved ur poem a lot

    all the best and take care