Last Cut

by Love Fallacy   Feb 2, 2007


Its hard to stay determined,
When things look so dim.
No matter what you try,
You never really win.

Hope is slowly leaving,
I go find a friend.
One who's always been there,
From beginning till the end.

As silver as the stars,
Its held in my hand.
Take the cowards way out,
I am not a man.

I've cut a million times,
But never this deep,
Red water lines my bed,
I'm going to sleep.

The white lights fade away,
Black is all I see.
God's no where to be found.
What's happened to me.

I pray for all my sins,
I regret all of this.
I took my life today,
Was left without a kiss.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Nea forever and ever

    Wow....that was sad...and depressing...not the poem...dont get me wrong i loved the poem...i'm talking about the what the poem was saying...its sad and true some people go through that....man i love your poetry...now i'm jealous i wish i was as good as a writer as you are...i mean i love to write poems but sometimes i just get the poems from my head not my HEART....Well the love poems are from my heart...but others i just get them from my head...sorry i wrote so much...but excellent...

  • 17 years ago

    by x0xTinkerDanix0x

    I can relate to this a lot... it just saddens me that people have to go through the same thing as I do...

    ~*TinkerDani*~

  • 17 years ago

    by Eman D

    5/5 sad ending...i liked how u said the knife was "silver as the stars"

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