I Love You

by End Of Eternity   Feb 5, 2007


If you look outside your window tonight
Every star will remind you of my heart
Some parts of it would fall for you
Just to make your wishes come true

If you ever make a castle of sand
Resembling to our dream house
Standing tall in the middle of summer day
I'll make sure to turn every tide away

If you look at the bright sky today
Clouds might form image of my face
Let my open arms take all of your pain
And i'll make sure to dry every drop of rain

If you stare at your reflection in mirror
Your heart will beat twice at a time
One to express how much I Love You
And the other to say that I Really Do

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  • 18 years ago

    by Lithium

    Awww thats is such a sweet poem i love your last stanza its really cute.

  • 18 years ago

    by - xoxrachellee.;

    Hey, thanks for the comment. I really liked this one.

    I guess I didn't come on here for a while cuz my life's been pretty hectic... and you know, I think I just might write a poem now. I don't know if it'll work out though, I just finished crying a while ago... lol.

  • 18 years ago

    by debbylyn

    What a beautiful sentimental verse....so full of love...

    If you look outside your window tonight
    Every star will remind you of my heart
    Some parts of it would fall for you
    Just to make your wishes come true

    All I can say is whoever voted this one down is just plain jealous and heartless.....I love it! 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by ImmortalKitty

    This poem is full of strong emotions, each sentence flows into the next, and the sentence structure is great. I love this poem.

  • 18 years ago

    by KemistryKia

    I really enjoyed reading it!

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