by Dark Demise   Feb 7, 2007

Whats your insight on pasts?
Dire Eagers, of a story for yourself,
Ridged foliage striking down,
Exaggerate your verb and noun,

Foundation of trust,
Step up and testify,
Have you discovered the pain of lust?
Ponder of sorrow, defy,

Morbid Images become a obsession,
Sounds from below teach you a lesson,
Eccentric heart you wish to see,
Cold foe's torment,begging for serenity,

Document the fall,
Forget the distance of A grin, and a smile,
Sacrifice to loose it all,
Your frozen in repetitive denial,

Rid-in threw the depths of the sea,
Large amounts of essence now cover thee,
Genuine heart in you there may be,
Yet neglected future still lay in front of ye,

Whispers in the shadows,
Flowers blooming in the peep of night,
Monsters in the shallows,
Voices In rise of light,

I wont sleep this night,
������© 07


Wrote this poem REALLY late at night, Was half way based off a dream I had,
Hope you enjoy it,



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  • Aw, this is such a good poem. I love the image I got from this. The flow worked so perfect. I've had dreams kind of like this, but I love the way you described it. Good job!


  • 13 years ago

    by Cayce

    Haha, at the end you said it was based on a drean, and all through this poem I kept thinking this sounded like a dream/nightmare. It seriously sent chills down my spine. You are very good at descriptive words, they make your poems more.. well just more. I really liked this one!

    Cayce xx

  • 14 years ago

    by mnemosyne

    I think this was wonderfully written. Dreams are so bizarre, and you portrayed that well, with strong vocabulary and imagery. Nicely penned.

    Take Care,

  • 14 years ago

    by Jenni

    Wow! Poems that you write in the middle of the night always seem better than the ones you write when you're wide awake! great job! 5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by dollwithafrown

    Wow, now that was good. I especially loved the last line - a great way to close it. Good work.

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