My apology

by in.need.of.a.lucky.charm   Feb 15, 2007


In a place you can't reach..
My pain is hidden deep..
Suppressed by fear..
And the memories I keep.

Thoughts of you..
Kill me to the core..
Too weak..
To get up anymore.

And if you were here..
If only you knew..
All of the pain..
That I'm going through.

I won't ever forget..
The choices I made..
I deserve this hurt..
I won't let you fade.

If anyone can see..
I'm screaming on my knees..
Hold me tight..
I'm begging you please.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Wings Of Flames

    Aching, pain and suffering. It is spine tingling, tear quaking, pain staking and emotion shuddering.
    Very powerful words and again excellent rhythm.
    5.5
    - Em

  • 17 years ago

    by BrixGoesxRawr

    This was really sad. It flowed great. The emotions just poured out of it. it wasn't my favorite of yours, but it was still really good!

    Bri x

  • 17 years ago

    by .K.i.T.t.Y.

    Hmm. this was a good poem. emotion ran through this like crazy. its not your best, but i still love it!

  • 17 years ago

    by BlueEyedMystery

    I can relate to this a lot.. It was very sad and emotional. The flow was very good. Um, I don't really see any flaws in it. So great poem! 5/5

    Keep writing!
    Cayce

  • 17 years ago

    by Cattiebrie

    Very passionate and emotional

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