Birthday]-

by Tricky Daze   Mar 3, 2007


Please hold my hand and tell me that you're alright
I knew that i have been so mean to you lately
Don't turn your head away you will understand I'm right
When i say the meaning of a perspective of myself truly

There are some things that you can't deny in life
And some things that bleeds your heart like a knife
That times world fades gray
You live just to spend the day
The only thing you want is to walk away

But now i understood you're so precious
You can lose a loved one,you should hold tightly the others
Otherwise you can really be a loser about your life ambitions
It can be even your mom but you can have nobody even that bothers

Hug me tightly,you can even squeeze me
I won't get angry,i can get down of my knee
If it will make you forgive me,please let me kiss you
And spend the night just looking to your eyes with nothing else to do

I would like to say those to your face,but it's too late
And it's your birthday i know and i would like to celebrate
I know you cry so much on heaven as i do on earth
This is day you died last year and the day was your birth
I'm sure you won't like that it's sealed with my tears and blood
I will arrive to you with it when i begin to sleep forever on my plot

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  • 17 years ago

    by in.need.of.a.lucky.charm

    The rhyming pattern was a little off and some verses had more lines than others but a really sweet poem hun

    much love and many kisses,
    bex

  • 17 years ago

    by Megamidget3

    Very good flow of emotions, and great take. keep it up! 5/5!

  • 17 years ago

    by *Wishes do come true*

    Very nice poem...the flow was ok nicely written!!

  • 17 years ago

    by Dark Demise

    Very deep poem, Lost it's flow on a couple parts, but over all great meaning, great story, good poem, 5/5,
    keep up the good work,