Society

by The Poetic Child   Mar 4, 2007


Stereotypes and judging
Hatred and Grudging...

kids slicing there wrist a reason of being in depression
kids looking in the mirrors, seeing everything but perfection
students dropping out, the percentage increasing each year
young teenagers killing others in car accident, from chugging beer

respect is becoming just less of a word
if you give respect, your just considered a nerd
Children fighting back to there parents running out the door
But its just a fight within ourselves, its just the teenage war

Egos rising people claiming to be in these gangs
Shot 2 times in the chest, feeling the Devils fangs
just these young kids.....who don't even know what life has to give
they didn't feel the joy of being alive, no chance to truly live

being classified your judged by what you wear and what you say
not only that, but also what you just show and what you display
just be respectful, wise, understand, propriety
just going to have to live with it...its our society

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  • 16 years ago

    by she

    Sadly, this is so true, each word got me, this is a remarkable peice

  • 17 years ago

    by .K.i.T.t.Y.

    The message is wonderful. the only errors i found were typos and use of numbers. like certain things seemed like they should be plural. reread the poem, you'll find grammatical things.

  • 17 years ago

    by Gasttlee

    This is so true, it's sad! 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Anonymous Angel

    I love it =) i know what your writing about, our society is getting worse..great work though

  • 17 years ago

    by Br0k3n

    Good piece of work (as always tho). I've been readin your poems lately, can say I've gone trough 2/3 of them. Love your style and everything, you're really really good at this. Added ya to my favourites. And yeap, wouldn't mind if you check my work n give me your opinion bout it :)
    Much love, Br0k3n