No One Knew

I really liked this one it was different but i liked if 5/5 so sad

The last stanza was my favorite..In the first "too" should have been "to". The rhyme sheme was off a bit also.. I think if you fixed it up a bit it would be great..It was full of emotion and so true for lots of people. 4/5
Tyanna

This was a beautiful poem, but the rhyming scheme was a little off. Fix it and it will be fantastic! <3.

You caught it perfectly.
It's horrid that abuse is so normal and is starting to be viewed as part of life. I had to live with it through my sister and it's been almost two years now and she still hasn't healed all that much in any way. The reason a lot of people who have lived through it don't come forward is because they think that it was their fault even if their children.
All you can do is try to help them start over and learn that not everyone is going to hurt them like that.

So true! people can be so blind sometimes! its not hard to see if someone is miserable sometimes people just don't see it because they don't want to such a sad poem but the truth is great and the flow was nice too great write

xoxo Lucy~