When the Sun Rises

by Nick who Plays Pool   Mar 17, 2007

As the sun rises, the nightmares will vanish
The Shadows will fade, back into the twilight
They'll drop back into the pits, where darkness waits
And free the minds of mankind, from the chains that held them.

Ill run free once more, run across the land
Bound by chains no more, running far away from twilights grasp
The darkness will chase me, the shadows will follow me
But with the sun on my side, they'll be scared away.

Everyday, Ill be running away
Till the sun, comes back up
Until the night, is pierced by the light
When the sun rises.


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  • 13 years ago

    by Of Sweet Insanity

    I was glued to this poem from word one! Great job.

  • 13 years ago

    by manda

    Completly 5/5 really deep and im still amazed youre only 12!

  • 13 years ago

    by iMfAlInGaPaRt

    That was...INCREDABLE!!!!!! omg...I really liked it...please keep writing...

  • 13 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    Well done! 5/5, you have a lot of talent. Keep writing!

  • 13 years ago

    by TillyMariex

    Wow! I rrly like it :)