by BlueEyedMystery Mar 17, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
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I'm trapped behind this rusty old fence, |
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Oh, I love it. :) You did a great job. I loved how you worded it and added stanzas. :) 5/5 |
by David
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Rusty really gave me a kick to this poem. you can add very descriptive words to this poem and still make it not sound too congested. well done. |
by azii
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Awww... So sad but soo beautiful! Hope this is not true, and everything's alright. But you did wonderful job! 5/5 |