I Fly

by Delie   Mar 18, 2007


I Fly

I fly high,
High above the clouds,
Where the sun shines,
And the angels sing.

I fly high,
High above the sea,
Where the sand glistens,
And dolphins swim.

I fly high,
High above the land,
Where the animals play,
And the flowers bloom.

I fly high,
High above the mountains,
Where the crystals sparkle,
And the snow falls.

I fly high,
High above the city,
Where night lights gleam,
And you sleep.

We fly high,
High above the world,
Where we're hand in hand,
And...I F u c k i n g Love You.
I F L Y.high.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Mezmeryz

    Hehe..that was BEAUTIFUL! including the little twist of bad language at the end :p naah..it was great..i didn't expect the end! i dont really know what others have to say about it..but i truly loved it!
    nuf luv xx

  • 16 years ago

    by lonelynow

    By the way I like the use of the swearing at the end. It pushes across the intensity of your love.

  • 16 years ago

    by lonelynow

    I really love how this poem describes an idealistic world, and then at the end you link your love with this perfect world, and this suggests to the reader that that is what takes you there. I think that's really clever. Great poem!

  • 16 years ago

    by Chrissie

    Aww this was so cute. There was detail and i liked how each stanza started off with 'I fly high' and it ended with that line. I also liked the naughty word that you used..expressed the feeling a lil more. Well done 5/5 Xx Chrissie

  • 17 years ago

    by Delie

    Hey y'all.
    i tried adding i onto the poem, but it never appeared.
    well. what i wanted to say is.
    first off the reason it's in nature is because flying to me is kinda nature-ish so ya.
    also i kinda wanted to "trick" people. so it's kinda a surprise ending.
    and as for the curse/cuss/profanity/swearing...whatever you want to call it. the reason it is in this poem is cuz when people say "ily" or "ifly"...I write it as "iFLY". it's kind of an inside joke, but one day i was just thinking... and this is how the poem came to be.
    so i am truly sorry for the people who don't like swearing, i personally don't either...but in this case, it's all a point of MY view and something that i just thought of. and it came to be.
    anyways i'm just yacking on and on.
    thanks very much to all of youz though fro commenting, it really means a lot to me!

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