I pretty much hate you.

by Dee   Mar 18, 2007


I hate you like I hate your hair
I hate your clothes, whatever you wear.
I hate your house I hate your room
I hate your mom and her gross perfume.

I hate your voice, I hate your eyes,
I HATE your friend! I hope he dies..
I hate the way we used to kiss
I hate your touch, which once was bliss.

I hate the way you led me on.
With faulty words, you had me drawn.
I love you like fat kids love peas.
Get out of my life, and stay out please.

I hate your TV, and every channel
I hate your couch that felt like flannel.
I hate your brain, I hate your heart,
I hate how your words tear feelings apart.

I hate you how you think you won.
You hurt my heart, but i WILL move on!

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  • 16 years ago

    by Sarah

    This Is Such a Nice poem...I really like it

  • 17 years ago

    by Brittney Follett

    Haha! I love this! If you don't mind can I send this to my ex? I only found two oops:

    I hate the way you led me on.
    With faulty words, you had me drawn.
    I love you like fat kids love peas. _-- right here---
    Get out of my life, and stay out please.

    Are you saying that ... or did he used to say that... either try:

    I hate the way you led me on.
    With faulty words, you had me drawn.
    'I love you like fat kids love peas.'
    Get out of my life, and stay out please.

    or

    I hate the way you led me on.
    With faulty words, you had me drawn.
    I hate you like fat kids hates peas.
    Get out of my life, and stay out please.

    and on your last line:

    I hate you how you think you won.
    You hurt my heart, but i WILL move on! _- I* -

    other than that... haha i loved it. Great rhyming.. awesome flow and magnifienct emotion.

    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by amoxi

    Wow this was a powerful poem, so much emotion in it, very well written 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by azii

    Great job!!
    I love this one!
    If you want to, you can check out my hate you poem... I hate that person that much, so I fully understand you.. :)
    But this poem is wonderful! It's absolutely perfect!

    Keep up the awesome work and Take care! :)

  • 17 years ago

    by Kaila

    You go girl!!! lol I loved this it was powerful and filled with emotion!! You did an excellent job!

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