by Gem Mar 20, 2007
category :
Nature, environment /
nature
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Two leaves are dancing in pale moonlight |
by Daniel J
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It's a sweet poem, but honestly, I grew impatient with the double lines...I think refrain is a powerful tool, but used too much and it removes the effect it can have and becomes a chore for the reader. |
by Rachel RTVW
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This is a difficult form and you have made it look so easy. Such a beautiful form......you make me want to write one. Excellent job!!!!! |
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This indeed seems a very tough pattern but the way u did it...it seems so easy. No matter how easy it is...i know i cant even try.. :o) |
by chavii
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Wow thats a masterpiece .Amazing the way you managed the rules and beauty together ,you very very talented gem. |
by Cindy
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Gem |