All I Ever Wanted

by blindedxxbyxxlove   Mar 21, 2007


When I wake up every morning I wanna see your face
Give you a kiss and make you breakfast, be held tight in your embrace
I wanna walk down the street and hold your hand
Go to the beach and play in the sand
I wanna lay in the grass and watch the stars
Go for a walk to show you where the pretty flowers are
I wanna make you crappy little pictures just to hear you say their nice
Wait up for hours just to talk to you, Say I do and become your wife
I wanna pretty little house and a fluffy little dog
A little swing that hangs from a tree for our baby to play on
I wanna make you happy to hear you laugh and smile
To be with you forever and ever, not just a little while
Who is gonna make my dreams come true if you leave me all alone
You promised me you'd never leave I don't wanna put my life on hold
Your supposed to be here when I need you and wipe my tears when I cry
Be there to catch me if I fall and tell me every things alright
See? I'm not ready for an angel you cant help me from way up there
That's why I need you here with me, To have someone who loves me and cares
We still have the rest of our lives, lets make the most of them
Well be together forever just like you said, lets be the happiest we have ever been
When were old and wrinkly and people mash up our food
Then we can both be angels and live happily ever after without rules
Well live on our own little cloud in heaven with wings and rings above our heads
And well still be together forever just like you always said

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  • 11 years ago

    by Gizmo

    Okay i'm gonna be a bit critical here, the structure, lay it out properly, its too hard to get lost when your reading it :[

    wanna is not in the dictionary- its i want to, also punctuation can go an awful long way if you want to advance your work.

    i do have to say, and its the kind of little thing i'd give my other half, just to cheer them up. parts made me giggle and parts made me said, and alot of it made me go awww thats cute.

    you could probally use different words its a bit simple. but overall the concept is really thoughful and really nice, just a little bit of work needs done. i don't want you to take all them things i said up there wrong- the poem is good :]

  • 11 years ago

    by Dustin S

    Awesome poem! 5/5!

  • 12 years ago

    by just me

    Yot are very very talented. Very nice. Looks like you may be becoming one of my favs.
    <3
    L.C

  • 12 years ago

    by I Seem to be the Heartless

    What a beautiful poem! Brought tears to my eyes. Nice job!

    Josie

  • 12 years ago

    by Christina

    That was very impressive i like it
    * thanks for commenting*