Sayonara

by Dian PH   Mar 23, 2007


I'm tired already
Being toy of your dream
Even my love got failed
Coz u trow it away
Blushing sky
Ambitious desire
To be with you
Saving my last breath
Only to my dearest you
But you do not care
I'm tired
Sayonara...

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  • 15 years ago

    by Mister 47

    Well as much i am angry or somthing , i would not say those words, becasue i can not accept that fact

  • 16 years ago

    by Fsams

    I was really skeptical about the heading and after reading the whole poem I could figure out what you were talking about. Its great 5/5 from me. Just correct the spelling mistake throw/trow

    Tc
    Fsams

  • 16 years ago

    by Rose not your average

    It was good it had a good some good rhymes

  • 16 years ago

    by Finalgravedigger

    It was interesting i dont mean to be a critic but put more depth into it 4/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    This is a good poem, you have a good talent here so keep writing. take kare xxxxx