Revealing the secret or not

by Dian PH   Mar 26, 2007


[please read my poems... i just made it right now... march 25,2007 @ 10am... i hope you like it]

how to prove
my love was true?
should i die
and sacrifice for you!

or offer my heart and my flesh to you.
searching on the clouds and through the sky,
do you care if I am gone already?

would you miss me as if no tomorrow again.
or you won't able to see me even I am here?
my secret love for you was no ending,
even for you its just nothing.

revealing my love
its not yet enough?
to fulfill my hunger heart
and loving you its my life

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  • 15 years ago

    by Aish

    Tis very emotional and raw.
    Very open and sad.
    well done

  • 16 years ago

    by Rose not your average

    Its a good poem not your best but i still enjoyed it ur a great wiriter this poem had a good flow and good rhymes! nice job!

  • 16 years ago

    by TravTagz

    Deep

  • 17 years ago

    by Finalgravedigger

    Very nice 5/5