by Marc Ortiz Apr 6, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
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Death the final destination in life |
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Wow that last line !! |
by Michelle18
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I really like this one...and i've felt the same way before many times.....yes its very painful... ^^i disagree with the person above.. i dont think you used some words too many times... |
by Melpomene
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Heya, I really liked this poem it was an enjoyable read. The only thing i think is you used some words to many times over. Other then that i liked this well done ~mel |