I shall believe ( Club Contest)

by Finalgravedigger   Apr 9, 2007


I shall believe
Finalgravedigger
The Hearts with a Talent

The greatest we dreamed
The greatest we were
Love pulled us through the worst
Greatest moments created here
And by you
I believed in my love
You were my hope my love
I was brought to the skies by you
But for what
To watch me fall
From heaven
To hit the earth and cry

As I fell
You only smiled my love
As if it were your goal
To shatter me for the rest of my life
But I have stayed down long enough
Now my love its time for me to stand
You think you've brought me down
Now I will show you
My sadness has only made me stronger
I shall believe once again

(edited by debblyn.)
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  • 18 years ago

    by Lyndsy

    I liked this one a lot! It gives hope to people who have had their hearts broken. I like that it ends on a strong note.

  • 18 years ago

    by Noel

    Aww, I love this! Reading it kinda makes me feel happy. It's very hopeful. Great job =]

  • 18 years ago

    by Forsaken

    This is a very special poem. It has such emotion and heart and soul put into it. I like it very much. Great work. And thanks for the comment.

  • 18 years ago

    by MaSkEdSoUl

    Omg that is so cute. Very well written, great flow and very inspirational, hope I spelled that right lol. I really enjoyed readin it. Anyways great poem! 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by debbylyn

    Nicely done for our competition! Your writing is really improving!

    But I have stayed down long enough
    Now my love its time for me to stand
    You think you've brought me down
    Now I will show you
    My sadness has only made me stronger
    I shall believe once again

    Love this verse....uplifting and hopeful! Well done.

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