Lie To Me

Really good..full of metaphors and I like how you used nature in each stanza because we experience it every day, week, month, and year...good right..though I didn't expect the end. Keep up the good work.

I really enjoyed this piece. I thought that the flow was really good. I also think that it was full of depth and emotion

Excellent poem. Amazing imagery in this write. Very detailed. The flow was consistent and the rhyming was not forced. It had an awsome ending as well.

-Shannon <3

From reading a lot of your work I find a re ocurring style you often repeat the last line in every stanza this creates alot of effect and when combined with the rhyming it really dose give it a sense of your style. I belive if I were to have read this with out knowing you write it I may have been able to guess.

It's hard to explain how well this poem was written.. It was absolutly amazing.. I loved it and I can still here the words playing over and over in my head.. You've penned and excellent peice, the words are entirely impossible for my mind to forget.
Very much captivating,
Splendid Job Laura..

Elainex