For every heartbeat.

by Teria   Apr 11, 2007


For Every Heartbeat. [Acrostic]

Flaccid minds
Outlast fantasies,
Reality, and pain.

Endurance
Varies with the
Evitable
Reasoning of todays
Youth.

Heartbreaks signify the
End
At sometime in life.
Routines
Teach each us that
Boredom consists of
Every unspontanious
Action
That applies too much effort.

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  • 18 years ago

    by The Queen of Spades

    One minor thing: unspontaneous? is that a word?

    Anyways, I really like this certain poetic style, it's excellent. You did a great job and used wonderful vocabulary and the meaning behind this poem is excellent as well. 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Mezmeryz

    Hey thats the poem you wrote for the contest, and i gave it 4th place, though in deserved more, your choice of words were awesome! congrats!
    nuff luv xx

  • 18 years ago

    by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

    Hm. I usually don't like Arostics.
    Anyways.

    This was very good. I liked how you broke up the stanzas in that weird way. It really worked for this poem. The meaning was a bit cliche, but eh, we all have our depressing days. Nonetheless, very nice. Your best so far.

    xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex 5.5

  • 18 years ago

    by Simple Sensation

    Hey,
    First of all thank you for your comment - much appreciated. Anywyas now your poem. I really liked the vocabulary youve used throughout it. Your discription creates vivid imagery which is just excellent! I was ingaged form the first ;line becuase of your description. I like how oyuve described heartbreak in the last stanza. I like the overall flow of the poem and i liked the message in it... To improve i suggest more punctuation but other then that a great read! Keep at it! xx

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