Baby's Blue Eyes

by The Queen of Spades   Apr 12, 2007


Blue eyes
A light ocean
Filled with
Azure and tints of green
Blue eyes
In a garden
With a
Saffron-painted scene
Blue eyes
A royal sky
Crowned with gems
Angel-kissed
Blue eyes
A pretty picture
With secrets
Rising from the mist
Blue eyes
A lovely girl
Dwelling in
A teal-rimmed land
Blue eyes
Wander
Taking life away
In her hand

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  • 11 years ago

    by Vanesa

    This, this poem, I... I loved it so much.
    I love the way it flowed and the repetition of 'blue eyes'.
    'A royal sky, crowned with gems.' Man. . I love your writing.

  • 16 years ago

    by SH3S fiNAllY H3R3 l0V3 U N3NA

    Aww, this is very sweet. 5/5

    Wow, this is a crazy poem. I liked it though. I can see you wrote it from hate. It was good. 5/5

    <mOnStRiTo'S pRiNcEsS>

  • 16 years ago

    by gack60

    This was a very nice poem, the structure was wicked and it flowed superb, The repetition of blue eyes makes it outstanding.

    IT JUST WORKS!!!!!

    well done

    5/5

    Gary.

  • 17 years ago

    by Tracy D Rollings

    Beautiful poem ,excellent write and well done and it was short ,I enjoyed reading it, great job 5/5
    your friend Tracy

  • 17 years ago

    by Vanessa

    This is the first time I have read one of your poems (I think) I really like your style. Nive use of descriptive words, vey deep, well pinned 5/5 Keep up the good work

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