Crashed [Acrostic]

by Infected with His Deadly Love   Apr 15, 2007


Creating a life, I don't want
Realising its going the wrong way
Ashamed of what I have became
Smashing the mirror into pieces
Hating the whole world
Everyone doesn't know that I
Drive only to crash

Acrostic Poetry is where the first letter of each line spells a word, usually using the same
words as in the title.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Hidden Feelings within these Words

    Wow I love this.. Very touching and emotional.. I especiall liked these two lines...

    "Ashamed of what I have became
    Smashing the mirror into pieces"

    Great write, keep up the good work, and thanks for your comment. =)
    -Ally

  • 17 years ago

    by ImNotPerfect20

    Great poem!! these kinds of poems are kinda hard to do.. please keep writing!
    (i reviewed this one becasue i had already done *The Reason*)

  • 17 years ago

    by Lonesomeme

    This is a great poem I especially like the last 2 lines:

    Everyone doesn't know that I
    Drive only to crash

    Very good job, I am going to be adding you to my favorites...5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Sole

    That was an amazing poem. Really powerful, the last line drove (Pardon the pun) into me. Really amazing writing once again.

    Sole. x

  • 17 years ago

    by BeautifulxMess

    Deffinatly better than what I do.
    I can't get these acrostics.
    LoL. You did a great job on this one.
    Thank you for commenting my poem.
    It was greatly appreciated.
    God Bless 5/5
    <3Tayyy
    ^__^ily

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