Losing Her

by TalkItOutInTheRain   Apr 17, 2007


She's haunted by her past,
The little girl she used to be
Before her world came crashing down
She once lived happily.

She was walking across a road one day,
When her innocence was shattered,
The screech of breaks, the thud as she was hit,
She finally saw what mattered.

Her mother screamed, her sister cried,
Her brother held her hand.
A strangers kindness brought her help.
But no one would understand.

The little girl that I once was,
She died that fateful day.
But no one seemed to realise,
It had affected me that way.

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  • 17 years ago

    by icarus

    Good poem. The second line of your second stanza seemed a little short though and I think it might have messed up the flow a little. I think maybe you should add a 'was' in there but maybe not. I'm far from an expert. Good job though, keep it up.

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