The Luckiest Guy (part 6)

by Goran Rahim   Apr 18, 2007


Dear the luckiest guy in the world
I don't know what to call you now
Look, how days change
Yet we don't realize it how.

I heard it, so did you
She has left us going so far.
What did we gain beside pain?
In this so called "cold war"

Do you remember her memories?
The ones that made me cry
Yesterday she flew away
Without telling us bye

She mislead both of us
Ignoring our true love
Now she went to deceive someone else
Making another life tough.

Now what should we do
Should we hate each other?
Or like two ruined persons,
Should we cry together?

*** please do not judge this poem if you have not read the first five parts.thank you

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  • 16 years ago

    by Alexandra Jade Brewer

    Oh wow, I found another!! You should put this with the rest. I really like how even after the other guy is no longer apart of this other guys life you still talk to him through your poems how you still relate to him. Its amazing!

  • 16 years ago

    by Gullan

    Just got one simple question is the poems of
    the luckiest guy
    real i mean is the girl a lover :) sorry to ask such a question just wondering where u get soo many feelings from to write such a nice poem

  • 17 years ago

    by Brittany C

    I think that it is the best part so far. I hope to the 7th part soon:) 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by abby

    Wow! if only i could write my feeling down in a poem... i know how you feel though! you did amazing and i hope this girl of yours will soon see the error of her ways! dude... i know exactly how you feel... for me i cryed for weeks when the guy i liked went out with my best friend! it hurts and im sorry! you were great 5/5!

  • 17 years ago

    by moonlil

    I loved all 6 parts of your poems. Great job!!

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